Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts

Monday, October 30, 2017

Famous Last Words: The Grind Continues

This week has been a very busy week to say the least. I was able to get my story done on time and my reading done. I think I have found the perfect way to get to where I want in this class. Sitting back and making a schedule and dedicating what free time you have to get work done early or done at all helps. Knowing I am going to California in a few weeks is also extra motivation to push to get ahead for that week I will be gone so I do not have to worry about school.

The reading this week was enjoyable and I liked taking one of the stories and making it my own. I think when it comes to the writing in this class I will probably keep telling it in a modern setting. The feedback I got for my portfolio project was extremely positive. Makes me think I do have a knack for writing somewhere. It also helped that my ignorant asshole friends enjoyed the story as well. Since we play games together we are very critical of each other. I stand by what I call them haha.

I found out I won 3rd place for the logo that I did. That means a lot and is a big accomplishment for a few reasons. The first is because nobody in my office thought it would do well and the support wasn't there. The second was because it was focused on the LGBT community. Not being LGBT myself I had to do some research on what would be appealing to the eye of someone who is. I feel that I accomplished that just from the feedback I had gotten from the event organizers back when I gave it to them. To have it when 3rd place out of hundreds of submissions made me emotional actually.

Until next week.......


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Review Week 10

Review Week 10


Going back through the announcements I noticed one that stood out to me. It wasn't just because a cat meme was used, but it was also the title: "Sometimes, being wrong is the only way we can learn." Nobody is always right. Learning from being wrong about something that you thought you were right about can be difficult. Admitting that you were wrong is even harder. Hard work and dedication is what pays off in the long run. 

Sometimes, being wrong is the only way we can learn.


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Reading Notes: Hawaiian Legends of Volcanoes Part A

Reading Notes: Hawaiian Legends of Volcanoes Part A

This collection of stories focused a lot towards the Fire Goddess Pele. These stories taught me more about Pele then I could remember and also helped to bring some stories back from memory. Adding descriptions to Hawaiian words helps the reader understand the meaning of them. I should look into using more of the Hawaiian language in my stories as Westervelt has done. It might make people more interested in the culture as a whole.


Hawaiian Legends of Volcanoes by W. D. Westervelt Part A


Photo taken by Prayitno, September 18, 2014
Volcano Goddess Pele, Source: Flickr.

Friday, October 27, 2017

Week 10 Story: The Strange Boy

The Strange Boy

In the small mountain community lived a boy everyone thought was crazy. He would take off from time to explore the surrounding areas. When he came back he would bring home a simple object and there would be an unbelievable story involved in it. His brothers were the ones who had the town convinced he was crazy. He was the youngest of the family and nobody could understand why he was the way he was.

The oldest brother decided all of them should go on a camping trip one day. Wanting to pack light they did not take much for food, and when they finally arrived to the camp area they had ate all the food. All the brothers came to the conclusion that they should go hunting and live the way of their ancestors before them. The oldest brother told the youngest to stay at camp while the rest went out to hunt, he was scarred the little brother would run off and accidentally get shot. 5 days and nights passed without his older brothers returning and he was hungry and he had not seen any indication that his brothers were anywhere nearby. With the overwhelming hunger and desire to explore the youngest brother went off in the direction he watched his brothers go, leaving the safety of the camp for an adventure.

Nightfall came upon the youngest brother and was forced to set up camp in a hollowed hole in the wall near a canyon. It was cold and the snow was everywhere. Thankfully he still had his brother-in-law's lighter so making a fire would be easier. Without water, he melted snow to make sure he was hydrated. As he got comfortable for the night he heard what seemed like a group of people all around him. He looked up into the sky and noticed that it was not people but a flock of crows flying around the canyon making the noise. The boy put his fire out and hid in a patch of bushes just as two crows landed and started yelling towards the crows on the other side of the canyon. The boy could not believe what was going on.

The crows were distraught and anxious as they sat on the ground, apparently crying for some odd reason. One of the bigger and apparently older crows from the other side of the canyon yelled over to them asking what was the matter? The two crows yelled back that two crows of them were shot and killed earlier in the day. They continued to explain that they had met a group of humans as they were hunting and tried to ask them if they could have some of the deer that was just killed. The crows figured it was ok as they had witnessed these men had killed a total of twelve deer during their hunt. The humans must not have understood them because as they landed for a few bites the humans shot the leader that was perched on the antlers and the youngest he was on the shoulder. The elder crow yelled back to them that it had been explained time and time again that if they were to eat a deer that had been shot they should be expected to be killed. Humans did not understand the language of the crow. The elder crow said that the killing was now in the past and it was time to move forward to dance and celebrate the lives of the fallen throughout the night. The crows did just that, danced and sang all around the canyon with fires burning bright for their fallen. 

Morning finally arrived and the youngest brother ran back to camp as fast as his legs would take him. He was relieved that when he made it back to camp his brothers were there around a campfire. They all looked in shock that little brother had made it back but they expected a wild story was about to come. The little brother explained what he had witnessed that night to his older brothers. They started laughing at him and told him to stop getting on the internet, that it was making him crazier by the day. Everyone was like this except his brother-in-law this time. He asked the little brother for more detail and when the brother told them the amount of deer that they had killed he knew this story had to be true. How else would the little brother know how many deer they had killed after just returning to camp. All the other brothers began to listen and it made sense. When asked how the little brother could see and hear these things he did not know and explained that they just happen.

The brothers broke camp and set back home. They were almost home when they came across a flock of sheep. They told the little brother that they would make a nice addition to the farm at home and he should try to catch one. The little brother was excited that his siblings seemed to treat him normally and wanted to impress them. He got ahead of the sheep and hid until the right time. He sprang from the bush he was in and grabbed the biggest sheep in the flock. As soon as he grabbed the sheep he was transformed into one as well. When he looked around the rest of the flock had surrounded him asking him why he wanted to catch them as he was a sheep as well. The lead sheep said they were on their way to a dance and that they would teach him their dances and songs. The young boy joined them freely and they found seven more sheep. This flock travelled all around the world, learning the songs and dances of many different people. Once the journey came to an end the elder of the flock decided it was no use for the child to continue with them as they had learned all they needed to. He transformed the child back to human form and placed him back in his home.

The brother-in-law sat by the youngest brother’s hospital bed the entire time. Despite that the town thought the youngest to be crazy, he loved him and enjoyed his stories. The youngest brother finally awoke and told his dream to his brother-in-law. After finishing the dream, the brother-in-law told him as they were coming home that he had tripped, hit his head on a stone, and that he had been in a coma for a week. The eldest brother walked into the room scratching his head. The brother-in-law asked what was going on and the elder brother said that he noticed eleven sheep walking out of the front entrance of the hospital. The youngest brother just laid back and smiled.


Author's Note. The original story had a lot of dialogue between the crows. I tried to keep this simpler and more appealing to a broader audience. Having this in a modern setting also helped me with the ending. In the original story the youngest brother comes back and shows all the dances and songs he learned while he was gone. The brothers also witnessed him leave with the sheep. In this version I wanted to change it and have the brothers believe he was just dreaming and that explained his stories from before. But the twist at the end with the sheep leaving the hospital just made them wonder more.

Bibliography. This story is based on "The Boy Who Became A God" in Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest by Katharine Berry Judson (1912).


Image proved by: Pixabay.

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Southwestern and California Legends Part B

Reading Notes: Southwestern and California Legends Part B


Part B was more about the origins of certain forms of weather. I enjoyed reading these stories a lot more. Still short and written to where they were easy to read. Not a lot of detail but gave enough for you to visualize the surrounding areas. The writing style also makes you envision a narrator telling the stories. I really liked the story about how a child that was considered weird ended up becoming a god.


Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest by Katharine Berry Judson (1912). Part B




Image taken by ForestWander, 9 February 2011 Source: Wikimedia

Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Southwestern and California Legends Part A

Reading Notes: Southwestern and California Legends Part A


The trend between the stories for the first half of the unit appear to be animals. The only real mention of men is in that they were created by animals from the earth or some other form from an animal's body. The collection of stories are mostly creation stories. They are simple and to the point, not a lot of detail. Could work for an audience that is just trying to power through. 


Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest by Katharine Berry Judson (1912). Part A




Image taken by ForestWander, 9 February 2011 Source: Wikimedia